Comments on paper: "Right To Pray"

Great strategy on starting the paper off with an example of your assertion, allowing me to “see” right away its topic.  Your thesis, along with the rest of the paper, offers some good arguments on how prayer performed in school should be an individual choice; however, the misspelled & missing words throughout dampens some of it.  My suggestion: before you turn any final draft, read it aloud first.  You'll be able to detect and correct some of the grammatical hiccups that may occur in it.  Although your paper isn't perfect, it poses an interesting discussion, no less.  Speak with me if you have questions about my comments.