Blog #5 Possible Rewriting Technique

In class Melvianne mentioned that students often think rewriting is done by simply correcting the red markings that are on their essay. I believe that one way that students can gradually push away from that particular habit, is to make students add another body paragraph to their rewrite. By adding another paragraph, students have to gather a new idea/topic that relates to the essay and may feel the need to change the entire essay to make that new body paragraph fit in. Im not sure if this would work, but its worth trying. What do you guys think?