Caitlin and Jacob’s comments during Wednesday’s writer’s workshop about draft for my literacy autobiography were well considered and helpful. They were:
1) I know this isn’t an essay, but I wish there were a thesis or a promise as Lindemann calls it. Right now, I feel like I don’t know where this paper is headed.
2) Maybe try to cover a shorter timespan.
3) Go back to Mrs. Perry or take her out of the first paragraph.
4) “Extracted” is a great word.
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